_Zen_ Posted September 12, 2003 Report Posted September 12, 2003 after years of being so close i guess it comes as no surprise that i'll try to be honest now i was never good at telling lies so i know its for the best to let you go off on your own way and that even if i could it would be wrong to make you stay not a day passes me by that i dont remember what we had but knowing that you're happy now keeps me from feeling sad i had such a great time with you probably the best time ever so you should know this isnt goodbye or at least not goodbye forever now i know it wasnt always good things didnt always go as planned but you must admit that overall the problems were out of our hands the only way to end this off a few last words before we part just know that whatever i've done has come straight from the heart.
WrenWind Posted September 12, 2003 Report Posted September 12, 2003 I like the structure of this ...makes you stop and think about each set of lines. Good work Zen !!
Ayshela Posted October 28, 2003 Report Posted October 28, 2003 i don't know how i missed this the first time around. this is beautifully written.
Zariah Posted October 30, 2003 Report Posted October 30, 2003 That was a beautiful poem, Zen! You had rhyming stanzas and all! so i know its for the best to let you go off on your own way and that even if i could it would be wrong to make you stay This was my favorite stanza, and I have felt this way too. Excellent Poem, Zen!!! *Hugs*
Beautiful Nightmare Posted November 1, 2003 Report Posted November 1, 2003 *hugs* wow i really love it very sweet! Nice work hun!
Regel Posted November 2, 2003 Report Posted November 2, 2003 It hurts to let go, but it allows you an opportunity to grow as a person. I enjoyed this as well _Zen_.
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