Since this forum is geared directly towards writing, i figured i'd see what the people around here had to say about this song i've written.
Reverence Of The Skies
The abode of heaven's stars
Words but mask its majesty
The moon does pass as too the sun
Day and night throughout shall run
And as you look upon the clouds
Painted glory and awe
You know something you cannot remember
From a time that never seemed to be
In a place that rests in the depths of your mind
Enigmatic shades carress your heart and soul
Singing as it shines the sky inspires the all
And as the sun imparts you with it's wisdom and it's strength
It rests it's head once more and feigns the mountain tops again
The children follow close behind
Standing tall across the sky
They've all but gone
The sky has darkened
The dance of the stars begins
Their master shines it's haunting light
It's boldness is heavy and strong
Calming... Soothing...
And still the wonder lingers
Tugging at your heart
The reverence of the skies
Will never be torn apart
It's left a mark upon your spirit
Never to be lifted