Tanuchan

In my opinion, the idea is good for a short tale. Too much of the arguments, even if they are lightened by a joking mood from the monkey, would get boring. It would be like watching two people who we know are hardly ever going to agree... what would be the point in listening to their day-long discussion? Unless you introduce some twist in the story, or some unexpected event, maybe going away from the "just overhead conversation" idea. I can't comment much on language, really, as I'm not native... but I have the impression that you would have to be careful to keep the coherence. The monkey and the tiger, and you style of writing, seem to convey well what you want. A comment I'd like to make, and I'm not very sure if it's pertinent at all, is that I have the impression that tigers mate for life. I may be wrong, though. I know this is not much, but I think you should go on and post more of your story, so that people can read and give more feedback to you. Of course, these are just my thoughts.

Oh my lovely tigertaur! Your eyes do catch me Your hair is really beautiful And your countenance... No words to define it. But what I love in you Isn't that which others see It's what you have inside That which you don't show It's the heart of the tiger And the soul of the woman Blended in one nature Blossoming in one being See the bonds we have For you already know I'm a wolf's soul Entwined in woman's heart But packmates we can't be Wrong souls, wrong hearts Like Romeo and Juliet Impossible love, tragic story Why did fate bring me you? Yeah, this is fun!

Suddenly, a lightning bolt crackles and hits with godlike precision Dave's sword, still on his hands. Dave yelps and jumps back, stumbling and sliding until he hits a wall. Trembling, he opens his eyes to see smoke dissipating and revealing his sword neatly broken in two pieces. And he can swear he hears a hamster's delightful squeaking... This is fun! Again, please... OOC lol Thanks for the "lynching" scene, Dean Peepi is certainly happy wherever he is (Toon's Heaven?), surrounded by Sunflower seeds... hehe... Good hunting you all!

Peepi looks at Dave, cocking his head while listening to his words. He looks also at the sword that is again being waved at him. And finally he looks at Pepe's limp form in his paws. Friends... need help... Ignoring the sword, Peepi bends over Dave and picks him by the collar with his teeth, carefull not to hurt. Under the stunned look of the other cartoons, he proceeds to the infirmary carrying an apparently unconscious Pepe in his paws and a flailing Dave in his teeth. Nurse Granny looks at the giant hamster in wonder as he gently deposits Pepe on a bed then craddles Dave in his paws, stopping his struggling. Pepe passed out... he wants love... "And certainly not the love of a giant dumb hamster, " grumbles Granny as she takes Pepe's wrist between her fingers, then immediately hits Pepe's head as he opens an eye. "Shh! No one comes in here if they aren't sick!" Then, to Peepi, "Well, and that piece of squirming cartoon?" Dave... babbling... his head is wrong... Granny looks over Dave, now standing on the floor and glaring at Peepi, with clinical eyes. "I can see his head is wrong. Well, Dave, I heard your suspicions... I can say I don't like you accusing some of them. And I see Peepi over there as pretty unable to use an eraser. He even likes Wile E., who just sees him as a giant snack! But I'm curious now as to why you suspect Prime..." Peepi sits down, looking confused. Don't like Miroku... like Dave... Dave likes Miroku... Like Pepe... Dave doesn't like Pepe... After some minutes, Peepi smiles, nodding. Don't like Prime... not good feeling inside me... Dave doesn't like Prime... good. OOC Changing vote to Optimus Prime/Lady Celes

Peepi looks at the Balance Beam, apparently considering how to fit Pepe in his presentation. A shadow falls over him for a moment, and when he looks at its source, he sees the flying carpet with Miroku peeking down at him. Miroku murmurs to himself, "I know you're up to something..." Something in that voice makes Peepi's ears twitch, and he keeps staring at Miroku with sad eyes. Want friends... you not a friend. Wile is fun. You not fun. Dave plays with me. You don't. Pepe is friend, fun, and play with me. You not friend, not fun, don't play. You liked GIR? Think not. Peepi sits down pulling Pepe to his lap and hugging him once. Like you, Pepe. You my friend! OOC A vote for Miroku/Ozy

Peepi looks down at the nice medal around his neck, fascinated by the way ist reflects the light. He changes position slowly, making the lights dance, never noticing a somewhat dazed Pepe staggering out of nurse Granny's infirmary. "Zat giant hamzter, where is he... I must keep far from himmmmmph..." Peepi absent-mindedly sweeps Pepe against a wall while mesmerized by the dancing lights on his medal, then smacks his own nose on the wall as he finishes one more turning. SQUEAK! ... Oh.... my nose... He rubs his nose, then notices Pepe's tail sticking out beside him. His face lights up as he drags Pepe out, sitting down and holding him gently. Friend! Where were you? Missed having fun with you... He nibbles Pepe affectionately, not noticing his feeble attempts at avoiding his slobbering friendship. What is there for us to play now? Still holding Pepe by the tail and completely ignoring his attempt to run away, Peepi's gaze falls over the Balance Beam. "No no no nooooo..." wails Pepe as Peepi walks over to the beam.

Eyremon, I *have* to say that I love "your" Wile E. Even if he's set on taking Peepi out of the competition Maybe the only reason why I haven't voted against you yet is exactly that So, please keep on with your funny schemes *off to the game thread, laughing hard*

Pepe is suddenly raised by his tail, and Peepi grins at him. I can make you fly... do you want? Pepe looks at him horrified, squirming to get free before he wins the relay race by being hurled over the finish line.

Peepi looks at Dave, curious... Cows? Awww... GIR liked cows... He blinks sadly.

Ouch! Please don't shout... You're not helping my headache... (I'll be back later... )

Well, how about some IC comment, then? Peepi is just following someone who has more hints than him, as he basically wants people to play with him

Peepi looks at Wile E. Coyote's flight with interest, almot grinning. Looks fun... Can I fly too? And then he looks around for Pepe, finding him - or rather, his tail - sticking from behind a colum. He tugs at his tail very softly. Pepe... play with me? Flying is fun! While he's trying to get Pepe's attention, Dave pokes him in his ribs. "Hey, Hamster! Listen to me! Remember GIR?" Peepi yelps at Dave's poking, turning around so surprised that he forgets to release Pepe's tail, dragging him out of his hiding. Dave hesitates a bit seeing Pepe dangling from Peepi's paw, struggling and yelling something unintelligible at that moment. GIR? Miss GIR... Peepi blinks sadly. "Ehh... well, see Johnny over there? He's very suspicious. Acting strangely. I think he's the Eraser. The one who took GIR from us." Peepi growls, unhappy. OOC Another one for Johnny Q/Vahk... and with apologies also...

Congratulations! *huge hugs*

"Very smart hamster! You are a champion of Love! When I have saved her, we will play all you want! Wonderful!" Peepi squeaks in delight, then both he and Pepe track down the scared lass. Pepe points her to the hamster, winking, and Peepi gently pushes him out of his way and behind a column - almost toppling him over some construction rubble. Unaware of Pepe's trouble, Peepi lowers to all fours and makes a surprisingly quick dash to that funny, dark lass. She yelps when Peepi suddenly nudges her with his nose, and turns back to hit his nose with her fists. "You horrible monster! This is not a way to treat a lady!" Peepi squeaks in surprise, taking his sensitive nose away from those annoying fists, and deciding to hold her tail to the ground as he has done to Pepe. He looks around, waiting for Pepe appear to perform the rescue... SQUEAK.... she hurts!

It's a beautiful poem and I'm happy you're sharing it at the Recruiter's Office *hugs* The path unwinds in front of me I know not where it goes But the places it goes through Are those I saw in many dreams Now awaken I follow the path Holding my breath step after step Ready to fight, ready to win Whatever comes before the end. ~Tanny

People really want you in the game, MTYFoolish Even if you got the bad habit of burning books and rooting for wolves

OOC The scorecard... MTYFoolish was still on the player's list, Ozy. IC Peepi looks from Pepe to the black, white-striped lithe figure, then decides that he still needs more friends now that he has lost one. Purposefully he takes three small steps towards that other figure, and lies down next to her. And instantly scares her away. Waaait... Pepe runs to the hamster, yelling at him madly about scaring his beloved. Peepi holds Pepe's tail to the ground gently, forcing him to stay there instead of following the fleeing figure. Understand you... wanna help. Pepe stops short when Peepi starts whispering into his ear, and slowly a grin appears. She's afraid... I go and scare her more. You come and save her. Peepi smiles, looking at Pepe again. Don't hurt me... then come and play later...? Peepi looks expectantly at Pepe, releasing also his hold on his tail.

OOC Ehh... Dean, MTYFoolish has been lynched...

Peepi bumps lightly Optimus Prime when he approaches to see what has happened, and lets out a low squeaking. GIR nice, fun... GIR played before with me... where is GIR... ? As Optimus shakes his head, the hamster blinks sad eyes, looking around for other friends. He sees Dave coming, and Pepe mumbling something near him. Peepi nudges Pepe gently, nibbling at his tail as he had seen GIR biting it. GIR played with you... play with me? Miss GIR...

Peepi looks at Wile E. leaving the room and turns to Dave. He doesn't play anymore...? With his stomach full, Peepi yawns loudly, startling everybody. He looks around, clearly searching for a comfortable place to take a nap. His eyes fall again on Dave, and he takes two steps into his direction. Dave rounds his eyes in surprise, looking at the giant hamster lying down next to him, with his giant head lowering over him... "Hey... no, you won't... nooo... mmmmphhh..." Dave's voice is muffled as Peepi lays his head on Dave's lap, curling up with a happy look and falling asleep in minutes.

Peepi looks at Dave, with a happy smile. He nods at his talk about faeries, but cocks his head at the ring of invisibility. Faeries cute. Thieves funny. Invisibility? Peepi likes being seen... no one plays with invisible Peepi... Dave explains to the giant hamster with a very patient look. "You are a thief. Thieves don't want to be seen. That ring will help you. Something distracts Peepi, and as Dave checks he sees that Wile E. Coyote has got his order for hamster pellets... Food? Hungry! Peepi jumps right over Wile to get the pellets, smashing him to the ground in the process. ~~~~~~ Edit: spelling

For the fun of it... I'm using Katz' poem, and keeping to poem form... So, I'm posting it at Banquet Room. I hope you don't mind! ~Tanny Edit: the poem can be found here

I have to agree with Lady Celes Love specially Pepe le Pew and GIR... and I'm looking forward to what Wile E. Coyote will do Though I don't like very much his idea of hunting me... lol

Peepi squeaks and jumps back when Marvin disintegrates the books, almost squashing Pepe against a wall with his movement. Feeling the dejected skunk's soft touch against his back and hearing his muffled yelp, the hamster looks back with a worried, gentle squeak. Oh... okay, you? He helps Pepe standing with a paw, then touches him softly with his wet nose, showing concern, nibbling softly at him to show his willingness to help. Wanna friends... you wanna play? Play.... oohh... play! With another squeak, Peepi turns back to Dave, who looks at the places his books had been with a blank look. Sensing his loss, Peepi nudges and nibbles softly at him. Then he turns with a somewhat upset look to the small martian, and his low squeak is very annoyed. No fun. No play. No friend. OOC A vote for Marvin/MTYFoolish

The sound of laughter brings a glint of happiness to Peepi's eye, reminding him of the children who used to spent time in front of his little cage to see him playing. He nibbles a bit more, loving Dave's laughter, then lets him go and looks at him expectantly. RPG...? Board...? Cards...? ... Play with me... Learn fast! The big eyes show curiosity, and Peepi nudges Dave very gently with his wet nose. OOC Will come back later with a vote ~~~~~~ Edit: for clarity, and adding two lines...