WaTTo

diminuative verbalisations demeaning beyond recognition stereotypical views harsh realisations societies downfalls moral destruction deliberating constantly thoughts profound answers unjustified stereotypical denial forlorn conclusion

A black depression heading my way a cloak of silence and dismay a visage of pain and suffering of truth that has long been hidden behind a mask of strength and courage a shattered soul has been revealed pieces scattered across a thousand miles malicious knife wounds cover my heart the pain and suffering become unbearable violent thrashings of pain and remorse crimson streams running from my body never stopping their relentless flow.. bleeding me dry from the inside out destroying me physically and emotionally corriding my very existance expanding on my fear and hate paranoia flowing like a fountain emotions tearing apart my very soul the essential core of my very existance shred apart like a piece of paper being run through slicing blades of steel red hot pokers of searing steel burning my eyes and all that they see excrutiating agony, but it can not compare.. to the pain in my heart that is being felt wracking the very existance of my being mortally wounding pride unparalleled dismantling the reality that i believed in living within myself thru this terror slowly shrinking from existance my body slowly decaying soon there will be nothing left my body dead and gone but that mask will remain to be forever on my grave

very interesting, i actually quite like it, seems to have a lot of strength and meaning to it despite its length

very interesting starting to get bit more of an insght into you appy

*admires his work*

my heart lies in tatters from the pain it has been thru my soul lies shredded upon the burnt soil which is my body ashes from the past blow across this bleak landscape covering what once was a delicate and complex land eroded away over time by abuse, emotional and physical wounds in the landscape filled with the escaping life blood seeping away slowly killing the land more every day but these wounds they can not be healed for the damage has been done and it is unrepairable so the land will slowly dissappear until there is nothing left a tragedy that should never have happened and a lesson that will be learnt..