Beautiful Nightmare

Awwwww! I dont know how it feels i have to graduate next year and to be honest i dont want to at all leaving my friends and all behind i dont think ill be able to move on for quiet a time after! so *hugs* I hope you feel better soon!

I agree with Ayshela! I know that there are people out there who know what its like although i do know that when you are like that you feel like you are the only one! Like both your poems hun well done!!

I really love it and the fact that you did it all by yourself its just really cool and graphic well done

*nod* its such a horrible feeling and to portray a happy image to people is quiet horrible especially on those absolutly terrible days when you just feel like crap you know? Iknow how it is and i love the way you have written it so simply yet it has great power!

Yey this is cool i like it alot reminds me of metallica unforgiven for some reason very good me likes alot!

*hugs* very good poem i love it!

There is a place you will never find Locked up tight inside my mind. I used to care about what you used to say But all of that changed today. I’ve put up with you both for fifteen years And all through that time I’ve shed so many tears. You had so many chances with me, but there gone away I cant stay in this house for one more day. You don’t see it the way I see You talk about me, but you don’t even know me. I don’t care what you say I don’t need parents anyway. I have lived without them for years And grown a better bong with my peers. My parents die over and over in my dreams And id be a lot happier if they were dead it seems. For the first few years of my life you had me under a spell Now I just wish you both would die and burn in hell. When I was a little girl mommy, you used to call me fat I never said anything just looked at you as I sat. But not everyone knew of this verbal abuse As every morning you smiled and poured my juice. And dad, you above all I wish was dead You have put me down so much I think I’m broken in my head. I hate you, I swear I do And once o turn sixteen I’m out of here and we are through.

*claps* o appy i love it! I really do im not quiet sure if i get the ending care to explain maybe its just me being tired hehe! But well done i really do love it!

O my god i really really like it especially the last stanza i have felt that way so many times its horrible and then you always wonder what if.......

Great! its absolutly brillent well done!

*nods* no i dont think this is a good start at all.......i think it is an excellent start hun! well done!

*hugs* i loves this poem hun im glad pere brought it back up wow i just love it hehehe sorry i dont think i could say anything else without the risk of sounding stupid but its very good!

*claps* i love the first poem i know how you feel i have had that done to me! Only once but it was very annoying! i love the other two poems too! Well done hun keep up the good work! And belive me its GOOD!

/me thinks we should have a disscussion on the value of money lol! Teach me how to have it!

*hugs her bro* i know you will miss her but its not the end of your friendship you know that! I know you know just reminding you! Love the poam and yeh in the first stanza that line goes well! So take that akward lil face away mister! lotsa love ur sis!

*hugs her dad* well done!

*nods* im lost ne one wanna point me in the right direction? /me smiles at appy! nice poem!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!! *hugs*

How do i learn the value of money wheni get everything bought for me?

*smiles* i understand about you writting it in french i think its boring i like french but well i mean its school wat isnt boring! *hugs* u write alot on suicide! *hugs agian* It makes me sad to see others in the depression possition as i was and still am i know how it feels and i wish other people couldnt feel it cos its just...horrible! *hugs* Love the poem and the rhythem i cant spell today dont mind me!

Hehehe god how i have had that conversation over and over me of course being the person who turns away! Isnt that right pere? God we have had many! And its so hard i always have to look away! Anyway dont mind my blabbing on haha! I loved the poem hun well done *hugs* xxx

*hugs* i agree with my bro on poetic lisense thing! Wow i actually agree with alot of what he says! I really loved the poem hun keep up the good work! *hugs* u no i love u and am always here for you!

*looks at pere's poem and smiles* its true hun! But i know how you feel and *hugs* its not a nice feeling! But those people who do that to u they dont care! And thers always way more people who really do care than those who dont! :wizzie:

*giggles* this was funny when i was reading it at the start i was like WTF???? Then i got into it and it was funny! Hheheehe good poem its alot different to what we usually see!

/me wonders who lizzie is! Anyway great poem i hope none of my friends ever vanish offline *pouts* Great poem i liked it alot!