Beautiful Nightmare

yeah i like that too hehehe its a really cool poem though! I'll tell myself Its the coffee That makes my hands- Quiver- as they reach Across the ocean of space Between our desks To follow those Familiar lines I have once traced That are the face I know so well * i love this stanza *

*smiles* i'm back!! Anyway i kinda got what pere got from it that like the guy saying he loves her he is only kinda saying it so she will stop nagging him and stuff! Okies i know that sounds very simple and stuff but i think i've lost all my big words *searchs under couch* eeeps no there gone, if anyone finds them you know were to find me! its a very good poem hun! love you lots! xxx

*hugs and hands a neatly wrapped present* HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!

*comes in smiling and carrying blanky and teddy* thankies i think im getting better went doctor i have tonsilities and strep cocel either of the two have no idea how to spell hehehe sorry!!!! Though i guess your used to that little problem i have by now *grins* thank you all! O and thank Bwian! love you lots!

Very good poem i really enjoyed it! I love the way you were able to portray the emotion so clearly something i find kinda hard to do myself but you seemed to have no problem with it!! "My heart is broken, yet still breaking" Thats my favorite line! Excellent poem hun!

I like it alot but find if you put the poem into stanza's rather than the way you have it at the moment it's just that its easyer to read!Remember its only my opinion! First we were nieve and young, we were simply friends without a thought. And we've both searched endlessly for love, but each search has been for not. I knew we would grow past adolesence; you would go your way, and I'd go mine. But now I question one thing to myself: is your love what I'm trying to find? Is it your kisses at night I dream about, and is it your hand I want on my chest? Is it your cheek I wish to gently stroke, and your skin I long to caress? Are you still simply my friend at best, or a figment of my heart's own dream? Are you forever made to be my friend, or are there lines we forgot to read between?

Yeah it really does make you think! I like it alot though i had to read it like 5 times

I can feel it yey really good poem!!! I like the way it repeats it gives the poem its rhythem! I love it

*nods and hugs* great poem hun!!!!!!!!! i really love this poem it just ..... i can relate!

*hugs* hahaha yey get me off your mind for a while and expand your writting to other things its really good hun stop saying everything your writting is crap please there is no need because you are really good at writting you just cant see! You need to build up that confidance babe and relise that not everything about you it bad! I especialy love the verse: Save us from Hate, Save us from Fate, Save ourselves, Before it’s too late##

*grins and hugs* hehehe nice poem hun Jassette must be a very lucky girl *winks* hehehe yey your a member knew you could do it! *hugs again and trys not to fall over laughing at wyv's reply*

*nods* I know what you mean!!!! I love the poem i always feel like this in different situations like if i have to give someone bad news i feel so guilty i cant bear the person to look at me.... also i have felt the way you have in this poem! *hugs* Great poem hun!!!!

*hugs tight* happy birthday hun!!!!!!!! :wizzie:

Hi i really didnt know were to place this but i suppose here is ok right? Anyway i just need some help if you dont mind.....I think i have a problem. I am happy at the moment with my boyfriend with my friends, but i seem to hurt those who make me happy always try to push them away somehow and i find any excuse to do it for the smallest of things. I hurt them so it hurts me to see them hurt, i feel like i deserve this.... like i deserve not to be happy? I think that is it i cant really describe it! I was used to being depressed and down alot and now that i have been happy for the past four months i think i just cant handle it or something! I have always tried to push people away once they get close but never like this! Please try help me figure this out before i ruin my happiness!!!

I stand here cold and still, Staring at the bottle with only one pill, One-hundred there was in all, Everything goes black and i fall, Look on the bright side of suicide, Now i have no feelings left to hide. As blood pours from my eyes wide, You see now no-one ever took my side, I hated everyone i was around, Now im happy six foot under-ground. Look on the bright side of suicide, Now i have no feelings left to hide.

Why do you tell us we have to fit in? Why are we not allowed to sin? Why cant we make our own mistakes? All wrapped up in case one breaks. But they dont't see what i see, They will never understand me. Cause they think they know, Whats best for me. They dont know, Cause they cant see, Blind to every opinion but there own, And force on to me everything they've known.

This is a great poem and i enjoyed reading it alot i am not religous but i think that people can take it to be a different way than religious....as everyone can take this to there own personal level as sorcy said!

*hugs* i love all of your poems omg i really wish i could write like you , your poems just touch on membories and bring them to the surface again! great poem hun!!!!

ok i didnt quiet get the first poem till after i read my brothers reply but now i do get it its kinda cool i like the way you put your words ok that sounds really weird but i dunno something bout the way your sentances are and so forth i dunno it just makes the poem ok ill shut up *hugs* there great!

this is really good i liked both versions of the poem and i think the idea is really cool a poem about poems nice

Aww this is a cool poem i know what you mean about the last stanza i like it alot but i dont know if it flows with the rest of the poem or not! But anyway its still a cool poem!

you have great poems i love them all!! Keep them coming!!!

This is such a cool poem and what makes it even better is that i know were you are coming from!!!! Aaaaah those people make me want to scream i have one as a friend at the moment see the thing is when she is not looking for attention she is a nice person i just dunno what to do with her! Anyway really good poem i loved reading it like five times hehe!

Everyone has there bad days just everyone deals with it different! *hugs tight and kisses your forehead* like the poem

*giggles* someones getting full of themselves *oils your head so you can try squeeze your head through the door* good poem though