Beautiful Nightmare

Mellowing in my dreams, Your heart consoles me there, Nothing is what it seems, I hurt at your stare. Your face reminds me, Of the person i used to be, Of the man i used to see, Of the girl no longer me. I clear the pages Of all my dreams, Of all my hopes, Of things to be. I unwrap the thread, Of all that was held. I unwind my heart, Watch as it falls dead. Down in the dark, I sit alone, With many surrounding, I act as a drone. Functioning little, Caring none, Knowing that I, Have lost my one.

I'm fading away, Away from this world. It's bitter and cold, I did all that i could, To save myself, To save you, Im down on my knees Tell me what i should do! Im bitter, Im lonely, Im cold and im angry, Im just trying to save us. Please dont break this. Where did our friendship go? Seems like it blew out the window, Along with my heart. So many years ago. I close my eyes And i sleep this away, There I am happy, And at least there you'll stay. 'Cause I dont want to care anymore As your hand reaches up, And closes our door. Im fed up, Im upset, Im lonely and cold, And im begging you please, Just to come home. Where did our relationship go? Seems like it blew out the window, Along with my heart. So many years ago.

I can see what Quiny means but i suppose its the way it is read. You always write poems that i have felt like before its like your going through everything i did and still do at times. Maybe its teenage hormones still lingering hehe. Good poem maybe an audio of you reading should be put to it,eh?

This is a really good poem perhaps you should add paragraphs to add some structure to it? How can you make your own destiny if what you strive for has not been achieved? Therefore i fully think that what you strive for is your destiny, something other than the way things are right now. Kids would never be better off without a parent believe me i know. "Mother and father is the name for god on every childs lips"-Brandon Lee in The Crow. Maybe its that you want to be loved so badly that when it comes along your blinded by either fear or looking for love in another way. Im sorry for rambling or if any of this offended you for some reason i apologise completely.

Is it so simple to choose between life and legacy? Alkalis knew his legacy could be achieved at Troy however he also knew that this would come hand in hand with his death and he still chose to go to troy. He did this so his name would live on for centuries after he did. I myself am completely afraid to die and only see it as a comfort factor like most when I am very down. It is one of my greatest fears but it is not the greatest. My greatest fear is to be forgotten and not remembered. When I die I will live on in the hearts of those I knew and loved. However, when they die my gravestone will become a title less piece of stone and all I did in my life will be lost. If I could do something, something truly amazing I would be remembered forever. I would live on in a story. I would go down in the ages, immortal in the form of a name or story. Some people build time capsules to be remembered however this does not make their name known to the world at the tip of their tongue. When you think of it like this you realize why he chose his legacy. Now think what would you do? Tell me what you think!

Missing you Why aren’t you here? To dry my tear And stop my fear. Why did you go? I miss you so It hurts so much But I put on a show To find yourself You did depart Now that we are apart In two pieces lies my heart.

Sorry for the delay i have ten minutes at the end of each computars class to check my emails and reply and do this hehe So if i dont get poems finished just look for the rest of them the following friday!!

Embracing arms hug Around a once happy face Smiles changing with the wind And changing with each days grace. The sunshine of your lips Now hold winters chill No light comes from your eyes Every muscle is still The light slowly fades, The sun is burning low, A tear drips from my eye And is instntly frozen in snow.

so i'm guessing your in love then? its very cute! I love your poems i wish i could write happy love poems! Guess ill stick to what im good at though if i remember what that is! Your extremly talented and creative i love your work!

Aww its so sweet! I love the way the structure of it and the way it flowed beautifully!*big hugs* welcome to the pen sweety hope to hear more from you!!!!

*smiles* good to see you writting again sweety! Written for anyone i know?! Good poem i like the structure and style. Ive missed you...

*hugs* feel better soon and give your little ones a cuddle from me

Is this supposed to be a joke of some kind? I actually find it quite offensive and you seem very shallow i think you should rent out that movie shallow hal

Victims aren't we all? Of love, lust and hate. Victims aren't we all? No rest till each other we annihilate. Victims aren't we all? Of suffering and decay Lying in our beds Waiting for our death day. Victims aren't we all? Even when we are happy Victims of our emotions We will remain most likely.

Ok on the first poem i really like it i know people like that who try hide who thy are with make up some of them try to hide there sadness with it because it makes them feel better somehow i never understood those people! But i really like it and i love the way it flows my favorite is the first verse i love it well done!! On the second poem-Smile. Its a rather sad poem very touching too! I would hate to be in a situation like that and to be honest i dunno if i could be happy for them but i suppose what else can you do? Again i love it i think you are a very skilled writter i love you poems!!!!

*huggles* Hey you spelled things right also well done hehehe! I really like this poem reminds me of what i used to do just feel sad an lonely but still pretend to the world that i was alright its such a horrible feeling! Anyway i love it and i love that i can relate to it!

Once again Appy i love your poem! I hope your muse remains with you for a long time as it is such a crime not to have your poetry around!

I think nearly all of your poetry i have been able to relate to in someway and nothing has changed with this poem! I know how vunerable it feels to let someone in and i know is not a nice feeling awaiting the stab in the vack but hey it turned out well for me in the end so i wish you the best!

haha whats not to be impressed with its very cute!!!! And its silly so even if she doesn't think its soppy at least she will laugh as i did!

*pouts and hugs* Its a really good poem i love the structure i dont think i have seen it before its really good i like the simplicity of the repeating words i love the poem

The tree's rustle in the wind, And i sigh. A child skips along the path, And I cry, Because I know, Everything grows up to die. Barks, they burn, And leaves they fall. Children grow up To be strong and tall, But then they grow old And have no life at all. They just sit in a home, Watching life pass them by. Just looking out the window, Waiting to die, Not knowing what's going on Humming childhood lullabys.

Im always late for these things! happy birthday!

Oh right i actually had to read it a few times to understand it and now i see its very straight forward excellent poem hun!

Yeah it is pretty cool metaphor! I like it alot!

I love this its very sweet and has something calming and lullaby like about it *sings alog with purple_shadows*