DL_Snake

This isn’t the first time I crossed the line To reach to you To say I love you Why can’t you see? That you’re the one for me I haven’t felt something so true As the feelings I have for you Your man, where is he? I see him with another she Why do you persist That he’s yours and you’re his? When you have need I’ll be here Godspeed When you need hope You don’t need to find Pope. I am here, awaiting The day you’ll be seeing That I’m sitting here hoping That you would return my loving As I pen my last lines I glance at the times When I longed for you With a love so true But alas we’re through…

yup...well it's to be loosely rhymed, anyway...thanks a lot Ayshela, I didn't even notice I over-used my writer's license in that line =)

Heartbreak hotel..... *sigh* blue seems to be the mood nowaays *huggles*

I've altered it a bit Thanks for the comments you guys Ayshela, I do believe I tried to rhyme most of my first lines with the third lines in my stanzas, or maybe i rhyming wasn't good enough or too subtle =)

Another empty day, Lost in a daze, Longing for something to say. I look at her, Happily going around, While in my eyes gather a tear. I love you, I want to say, But the sight of her makes me blue. To know such pain, Wanting something improbable, For a mere human, driven insane. Foolish me, Dreaming of her, When I know I'm not her cup of tea. Alas my heart cannot desist, I fail to rid my love of her, Her charm I could nary resist. And so I carry on, Day by day dreaming, Day by day more forlorn.....

Gasping for air as his syrup-drenched face reflects his dismay, Snake quickly performed a transfiguration spell that transferred the liquid to the floor before it stained his clothes. Looking around in amusement, he spotted Wren's wretched state and smiled to himself. "M'lady, you do look like you are in need of assistance,"he observed. "Oh, hello there, Snakie, it's been awhile since I saw you. SO you've finally managed to extricate yourself from your secret cavern at last?"answered Wren sarcastically. "Touche. That's no way to treat an old friend now, is it? Especially as I am about to help you,"Snake waved his hand as he spoke. "Help me? Hahaha, since when have you ever had the heart to hel-,"she was cut off as her gown was returned to its original state without the tattered conditions it was a moment ago. "I'm sorry I can't fix the hair, Wren dear, but you know my sense of style has really gone down the drain,"said Snake with a smile. "Oh my, thanks a lot, Snakie!"she cried as she gave him a hard hug. "Now to find someone to fix my hair for me...."she muttered as she released Snake and looked around. "While you are looking for your remedy, please permit me to be your excort?"Snake asked hopefully. "Oh, would you? I don't see why not?" Arm-in-arm the duo went around the party, hoping no one noticed Wren's state of hair, as it was....

This is my interpretation of your poem, Appster, correct me if i'm wrong: in the First stanza you're seeking answers to life that many have tried but unsuccessfully answered. carried on in your Second stanza i feel like you're forming your own answers to life without referring to that of those formed by others before you, hence the "inexperienced hands" In your third, I am inclined to think that you HAVE managed to find the answer that many could now, but now the answer you have found leads you to even more questions to be answered in life. Your last stanza reminds me of Jesus, who preached the truth but was rejected by the populace, likewise you have found the truth and want to share it with others but it is thrown back in your face. However, from all this, you found life again, or maybe you found the meaning of your life from the truth you have discovered from others. PS: I felt very connected to your poem which is why i attempted to decipher it, perhaps I am wrong but nevertheless it has touched me deeply. Thank you very much for sharing this wonderful piece of work.

quite well-written...but there's just something that's hitting me as 'something wrong' with it....i dunno what it is..i just feel like it can be improved (yet i dunno how hahaah) maybe it's just me.....but I like it anyway

wonderfully done..you might not know where it came from, but it certainly came from somethign good. i like the diction and how it runs when i read it out loud...maybe i can make a song out of it =)

I like this poem very much. It somehow catches the spirit of two people who don't know each other, sharing thoughts but not openly. Happened to me once in an elevator =) you captured the atmosphere perfectly, kudos!

A cowled figure edges towards the line of people eager to enter the Conservatory party. It doesn't like crowds, but it has an infinitely curious streak. Moving towards the line, he nudged someone to ask what was going on.... "Aiiiiieee!!!! It's a monster!!!!!"screamed the hapless man and ran off from the line, dropping a pair of garish boxer shorts on the floor as he took off. "Hey sir, you dropped something! Ello!!! You DROPPED SOMETHING!"shouted the cowled being. This just made the screaming man even more hysterical and he promptly fell off the stairs and stumbled downstairs. Shrugging to itself, it turned around to ask another of the liner-up about the current event. One by one it made his way through the line, eliciting the same response from all the guests. Finally, it reached the front of the line, where it met Melba... "Erm, excuse me, but someone dropped this a ways back, could you possible help me-"he was cut off as Melba impatiently shoved him into the room. "Thanks for the entry fee, now stop blocking the line, sir". Melba didn't even bother looking under the cowl of the hooded thing as she manhandled it pass the doorway. Suddenly finding itself thrust into the center of things, it shook off his cowl and revealed a reptilian face, drawing gasps of shock from the other guests. They slowly drew away from it, shooting fearful looks at each other as they did so. It felt confused, usually this was not the response it received from other Pen members. "Oy, Snakie! Why are you stealing my thunder? Is the reptile look IN this season?"boomed a voice, breaking the sudden deathly silence. Snake turned around and spied Wyvern, mock glaring at him. Suddenly, he understood, he was off bargaining with a clan of snakemen and he forgot to morph himself back into himself after assuming the snakemen's guise! Quickly encanting, a green light enveloped himself and he was transformed back into his manly guise, complete with his coat of arms, swordbelt and shiny boots. Wyvern nodded his approval. "Glad you can make it, Snakie. What took you so long?" Snake shook his head sheepishly, "Actually, I didn't know there was a party." Wyvern slapped his own forehead in disgust, and then turned mirthful as Snake described his accidental entrance to the party....

lol what happened to my post? i remember posting it correctly. thanks katz =)

short, simple and to the point.... I've got a soft spot for these kind of poetry (as long as it makes sense) and yours is great. Very reflective

LOL I've got exams in a week and it describes exactly how I feel =p Good luck to you for yours

lol I don't think i am either tortured nor prone to self-destruction..so perhaps I don't qualify as a poet hahahaha

Bright blooms seem forever to stay In the Sun did the flowers bloom Until Master Fall comes to lay And cast the flowers a spell of doom Father Frost ascends the throne Bringing chill and snow to the earth Trees of wood break and groan Before crackling in the hot hearth Along comes Mother Spring to the fray Bringing life and light unto ice Waking sleeping beasts from their lay Stirring beasts from bears to lice After Spring reigns Summer's heat Petals open and flowers bloom In Moonlight crickets set the beat Until Master Fall again spins his loom Over and over the Seasons go Repeating, relentless, regardless of all Beyond all time the seasons flow All in Nature shall heed their call

I'[m not familiar with this type of poetry but the meaning is very insightful

Lovely diction And applies to certain moods as well. very nice =)

short, to the point, simple and most importantly, the WHOLE TRUTH!

hit the nail right on the head...ironically i just happen to be damn irritated at a guy who is exactly what your poem describes lol

Hey hey, thansk for remembering =) i'm so touched

short sweet and simple. i like

Wow...very impressive wren...where do you get inspiration for this stuff anyway?

congrats

it's so..............good it's very meaningful...reminds me of a symbiotic relationship. the statue is helping the ppl and the ppl are helping the statue. and i liked the ending