reverie

dream away... where you struck? looks good to me too... you having problems resolving music and rythems in you head with words put to page??? could try to lose yourself in you words by singing them as best you can, over and over and over again, throwing in improves and what not.... oh yeah, should maybe try tape recording yourself too... think could help maybe... okay that my 2 cents... or could maybe change up a line or two of the she's... from begin of sentence to middle like... "sometimes she speaks of we" instead... but then again i can't here you rythem am just really throwing darts in the dark... okay... revery the dreamlost "turn, turn, turn"(birds, animals, dillon?) the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?Edited by: reverie at: 10/8/02 12:19:00 pm

reminds of the cartoon gargoyles... rev... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

Hmmm, I like the rythem of the last stanza best... Starts soft and quiet, then pushes more lyrical like a song... kewl... one small insight though, i think you could, easily switch some of the more passive lines to active... i know @#$@ eng 101, but hey just a thought... good job... revery the dreamlost "you're a prince, a gentleman, and a scholar" (jd salinger) the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

battle? I choose you fountain! heh, sorry couldn't resist... Foutain: Apathic character with a green glowing ball named bally in his head.(can only be seen at moments of great stress) Bally acts as concious, guilde, friend, void(see WOT) and all around vampire D mutant parasite hand type relationship thing... Was put in his head by a yogu enthused ex-girl friend. Prodogy of Revery the dreamlost... Though as to what revery teaches the lad, no one is really sure, sense he seem to be have none of revery's powers... Sex: Male Age: 16 Race:Human Alignment: Good/In favor Magic: Dumb Luck, Bally induced moodswings. some very specilized summoning skills(see abilities) Skills: some skill with a quarter staff, spear, pike and or raven's beak, minor scholar in alchemy. Does scribe work on the side. Armor: chain mail, lots of chain mail...Hero's weave extra thick... enchanted by revery to be extra light, self-repairing(given enough time), waterproof, rust proof and lightening proof... Cloths: well oiled boots... Green Coat or jerkin... depending on the occasion... Special Abilities: Can summon a former living breathing ghost castle named 'castle' as a place of refuge and or portal/way point thingy... *note: 'castle' is imbued with the personality of a small cute, loveable dog. or i guess that make it a ghost dog now. oh whatever... Can summon: Revery the dreamlost for advise beyond the scope of bally much like a obewon konobe sorta thing..., but better not cause I'm on vacation.

Revery stumbles around a corner.... "Oh kewl new dark evil type person... Hi am revery of old old old B2 Banquet hall... Poetry and Rambling my specialty so you'll note the mediocre role playing guise," winks "um anyway here, you can have one of my archmage annoynomous chips"

08OCT02 Wrote this for a friend... kinda interesting looking at it from the other side... Holding on and Holding off… Words so tender Words so soft… A brillant wonder of a boy Wants the things that bring me joy… But the lanterns beaming much too bright Casting shadows in my sight -As we play the game. -As we play our games… But holding on and holding off Love so tender Love so soft Knowing that your heart is true The world exists for others too I’m not a Sunshine in your sky… For me you do not have to die But holding on And holding off Much to hard, to shake the thoughts: -That we need a little space to grow -And we need a little time to slow… So down the line, if time sets in Should be fine, if ya try again … So holding on And holding off Forgetting all the time we lost Rebuilds the glimmer into flames -As we play the game -As we play our games… revery the dreamlost "al lo" the dream continues...

hmm, scorn the same girl that used to be called One_mean_elf or something about bunnys... like waaaaay back in the day... She was always fun in the b2 and old, old b1 hall... we didn't see eye to eye on a few things... but she introduced me to sluggy freelance, so you gotta take the good with that bad... revery the dreamlost "one more around again" the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

revery checks notes... um, don't think i've covered that one yet... maybe a line or two but that's it... oh well looks like i have another project to work on then revery the dreamlost "and the rain came down..." the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

Revery rest queitly on good sized rock near the edge of the bank...Soaking up the sun he observes the goings on around the pond... Still a little phased from the trials of the summer, he sends for fountain to record all the goings on... A lad but a boy, much always confused, quiet and shy, with nothing to lose... Save small bits of resolve... bled cold behind walls, to quicken and tighten shields forgotton so small... -Come fountain. Come here and twist your brain around the events of the day, for i am to weary , to weary to play, And with that revery slips behind a dreamless haze ... Fountain wakes bally the voice in his head, to recall the procession going round like rev said... Shimmering green In spots burning, in some places red... Bally list toward fun times Nestled snug in boys head... -Lo, lo, lo, mates... My some should be fed. A flopple tops purple/dress royal -wolf's head... And fox fur still grumbles finds scrapes in their stead Of small tasty purple questing off canid's dread... as bally grows brighter in visons of fright/ forced slumber fogotton carried off through the night... And fountain pounders whether, whether to wake poor lost rev, to the rescue? long fogotten, wake castle instead... Cascading light from all angles... pouring blue fierce then red... Castle murmers and shimmers, beaming happy-ghost-dead... Half-resurected... Living walls bend and break forming portals for casting seeing pools for all sakes... Archways disolve, and corrdors fall... and waypoints for travel beckon welcome to all... Bally whistles softy -only a day from the dead, rev won't be happy... ghost fortress you bled... revery the dreamlost "lo, lo, lo," the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?Edited by: reverie at: 10/4/02 4:06:54 pm

welcome back... I can relate some... but am confused as to who the 'them' and 'they' are in your poem... we're not machines; we long to be loved... but sometimes we just can't give it... maybe from old defence mechnism that went a'rye... an old pain... something blocks it... or maybe you just can't find someone to give it too... that is someone that will return it... so you wonder will my time come? every dog must have day, too cliche? maybe... if you find yourself in the position to make the great leap of faith required to love someone... i say take it... sure you could mess it all up... but atleast you took the chance. the old line about a coward dying a thousand deaths seems true to me in this respect... though sometimes it's better to play it kewl and wait for things to fall in you're lap... aah, but the waiting seems to last a life time... so maybe try working on yourself some... and let what will come, come... give to others too... and hope for nothing back.... a little bit of energy reflected back always helps... but don't expect it... am not saying give everything to ppl that misuse and take advantage of your kindness.... ahh, but it's hard to take your own advice... hmm, well, seem to have got off on a tangent again... later ppl am going to bed... revery the dreamlost "...nothing feeds a good flirtation like need and anger and desperation" (a.mann-the moth) the dream continues...

July 22, 2002 4:49AM An emerald girl of an irish isle… I met her watching memories The screen beamed on We talk anon, between scattered loads of laundry… A funny thing, to set one’s life, to meet one watching memories And drink the stars and charts the skies To see if and withal her future lies… While looking back… I smile and laugh And wonder somewhat wearily… If this keeps up… I may be left to dress In only well-worn memories revery the dreamlost "strike a light..." the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

damn straight... rev... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

sigh, this was my final attempt to get the girl i liked attention... but her selective memory did me in... The paths I see… (7Sep02) 2154 s.s.h. Time is short But so is life -or too much, too long When full of strife… As luck should choose To fill our sight… When things that could …or should or might A certain chance, on life we take When hearts are blind, to plans we make As paths before, -you open wide… Search forth your dreams ‘til you decide… Spinning words To make you smile If not for long Then just for the while… Whatever’s best To hold you high I’ll never ask -to you, the why… An ember glimpsed Will glow the same If years pass by And hearts refrain… Beneath it all We’re much the same We choose our paths But not our pain… revery the dreamlost "sleep is not the answer..." the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?Edited by: reverie at: 9/28/02 7:27:53 pm

actually zool... if ya really wanna go into dept with this stuff... i recommend talking with joe at project aristole... he love's that sorta stuff... www.project-aristotle.com/ rev... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

wanna battle??? I chose you J.D Salinger... Use overbearing older brother Buddy logic attack... gogogogogogogogoggogo... Oh no, he counter with super imbittered baby brother Zooey verbal josting attackkk.... argh crash burn.... heh... sorry don't really have time to comment extensively, what with them keep switching from day shift to night shift , then back to days... then oh waie you're going tdy next week... sorry we forgot to mention it to you...(ask peredil about tdy) plus trying to pursue relationships on top of college... am like AyEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.... but hey, am having the time of my life(death the time of you life, by neil gaiman... 2 thumbs up) Anyways... Z000000000LLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!! how could you... copying and pasting directing from online m-w... is my idiocyntric @#$@# up trait.... grrrrrrr... new i should have copyrighted it... lol... oye vey... what fun... to laugh and run in the sun... with sherlye crow singing back up to another cliche song... just for a tap, tap, tapping of the the toes... um... yeah... later all... back to reality.... ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! revery the dreamlost "I did what last night!!!!" the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

too true... rev... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

i like it too... harkens back to the age's past when sage's and poet's sought inspiration of a divine sort... I like, how you answer one stanza with another... ryhmes seem fine to me, but then again i'm a slave to rhyme and assonance, so i prolly bias... good job... revery the dreamlost "here you go..."(noddle) the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

revery shudders, "ghosts... in all forms" revery the dreamlost "i'm cold, brrrrr...shudder,chatter,shudder" the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

Time has passed a bit or so, since last that time, you had to go... The reasons why? The world, of course With all the trials and sad remorse... Turning 'bout, your back again And open arms invite you in To tell your tells and what has past Of time left lost, and friendships fast... ... welcome back seth... revery the dreamlost "once a time few years ago" the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

californication i believe... um, don't know if the songs real meaning (whatever that may be) relates too much to what you wrote... but it just popped into my head... heh... revery the dreamlost "insert quote here" the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

i don't know... for some reason the song porcelain by red hot chili peppers just came into my head... go figure? revery the dreamlost "all you wanna do is something good, so be ready to be ridiculed and misunderstood...(aimee mann, it's not safe) the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

thanx... the whole poem grew out of that phrase(though alittle altered)... kept it in my head for year and half before i finally wrote it down in nyyrak's draftroom... pub57.ezboard.com/fthedraftroomfrm3 rev... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

oh kewl... glad you liked... was just feeling happy thought i'd share... Oh any the jolly rancher thing... well my brain combined two old commercial/adverstisments from TV in my brain, and i went around saying that for like a year till my friend's i korea finished the "chew on this" trident sugerless gum commercial for me... revery the dreamlost "i'm so oh, oh, oh..." (rolling stones) the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

I-do (theme of D.R.N... revised 17Aug02) I can’t write for fear of fright I can’t fear if I let you near And I won’t win if I let you in So, I won’t even try… Call me a loser, call me a fool Call me anything, so I can be kewl Grant me an audious, lend me an ear It’s not that your special, it’s just that your near… -But you know me, so well I can’t hide, my soft-thin shell… ‘Cause I don’t love you anymore But I do …Not understand you Sometimes I feel, I should die… Sometimes I think, why even try ‘Cause I don’t love you anymore But I do …Not understand you Look back in the mirror, then turn away It’s only an image of you, anyway Why must it matter, what they hear you say… Today… ‘Cause I don’t love you anymore But I do …Not understand you revery the dreamlost "burrrrrr" the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

everyone must need get have happy thoughts like now! **turns on happy thought generator** whirr, buzzzz, spurt, sputter, sputter, clop, clop, cloppity, clop, clop, ping! and what not... new car smell, ben and jerry's mint chocolate cookie ice cream, scent of girl you likes hair on a soft spring day, swimming pools, flying, bouncing up and down, jump, jump... skip, run, tumble, turn about to and fro, back and again face within the one you like, just for tonight... go say hi not, need not ask why... because, because... porque and why? just say goodbye... why? so nigh? go good night... and dream a dream unending in slumber... waken by the warming rays of the sun toasting slighting eyelids flutter a bit, till popped opened... drawn back the curtins and open the doors... listen to the morning... birds songs so soothing... as cars still sleep shutter in carefully painted garages, and meter's yawn again, at the start of a new day... Turn right dear sunshine and do that again... wake we with your smile grinned for all to see... rocking all the world in the cradle of you glow... for now we know, that dark though kewl for awhile just make you sick... and morning crys wake up and seek to find that silly thing that makes everything, everything to those who care to share their time with you... cause when morning wanes... and glow does fade... you left standing still smiling at the world... not so shiny... yet what makes it so... turn sublime the world aroud you with your own morning's warming rays sent to 360 around to all... who meet you along... burn bright in the tragic gothic night of new youth... as moths find misdirection to the flame in fame... stare not so tight... but all around to take in... everyone and everything... blink, blink... holla... hullo... hello.... spurt, sputter... got broken... out of gas... machines at it's last... i call it fun... to jump and to run... you call misguided by delirum... jump, jump... more fun... flip, bipolar double sided wired starbuck injected numbs... kk, koolaid, kk capresun... with another silly smile, you spin round and round winding down, and down,... till you fall, sit,, spent exhausted ont the ground... gasp, pant, breath... wheeze, but never whine... not this time... **shakes head verigously** heh, revery the dreamlost "fun, fun" the dream continues... Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?