reverie

The person above me hugs lots, serves well, and posts much... revery the dreamlost "say ah" the dream continues...

...was talking to ppls in irc chat some time back... and suddenly had an a-pehinia...epfhnia... aephiny... um... a moment of clarity... anyways... finally thought up an explaination for the the statement: life is an orange... heard it said in a movie: can't remember which, but Robert Downey Jr. didn't have the answer either. life is an orange: it's circular, sour, sweet,(bittersweet) and kinda messy... revery the dreamlost "yes we have no bananas..."(Frank Silver and Irving Cohn) the dream continues...

here's some nice links... www.sluggy.com http://faith.rydia.net/index.html http://www.project-aristotle.com http://www.kabalarians.com/html/surf-by.htm http://www.webpost.net/mi/miel/ http://www.geocities.com/Area51/1719/main.html http://keirsey.com/ http://missy.reimer.com/wisdom.html http://www.holycow.com/dreaming/ http://www.fortunecity.com/skyscraper/brad...y/1240/amp.html rev...

*nods to vlad... kewl stream j... hmm, must be something 'bout the army that makes the streams come out more... don't know how you can do the lifer thing peridhil... i'm only been in 5 years...(3rd enlistment) and am already burning out... oh and vlad it's easy to write like this... all it takes stress... lots of stress and drugs... yeah thats right some good low-grade questionable quality drugs... that or channeling the spirit of james joyce... um, you guys know i'm kidding right? revery the dreamlost "thank u for your support"(?) the dream continues...

...???... There are answers but no questions in the land of the doubles. There are those who are blind, but none that cannot see in the land of doubles. revery the dreamlost "sureal..." the dream continues...

hmm... There is drought, but no one thrists in the land of the doubles. There is belief in god, but no religion in the land of the doubles. rev...

...dang board won't show my structure the way I laid it out in word... but this is close enough i guess... Casey. And if Casey grew too bold Would we care what the story told So he struck out, so he was out Isn’t that what we waited for anyway Hey, Hey… ...hey...hey So, Come on up and be our Hero Here to shine, For all to see Come on up and walk the narrow Make it last our tragidy There you are, our fearless leader …be the first the for all to see Hear the roar, now hear the rumble …be the first against the wall… Back pressed up… You're Masquerading… Be the first… Unless you- Fall- revery the dreamlost "wonder" the dream continues...

welcome... rev...

...'so ya say you wanna revolution?'(beatles) heh... rev...

...well you could just keep going on with your current train of thought, ya know... Listing more reasons why it's better for him not to talk/know you... I personally like making my poems to return to the beginning theme/thought in some way, shape, or form... Turn it reflective: i.e. knowledge of you troubled mind would spoil the image he has of you... or would trouble him as well... or that despite it all say, you like the attention anyway cause it offers a light or hope or something mushing like that... I mean... you could take all kinds of places... But i'm not in your head... so it's all pretty much guess work... hope that helps... revery the dreamlost "But if sense conveys reason Reason conveys consideration Consideration of the reason for rhyming at all" DRN draft 3... the dream continues...

i get it... ...my take of what going on here... Two's ppls are together... ...the girl prolly asked something along the lines of "watcha thinking?" and the guy goes blank... Totally blank... all emotions numbed atleast to the outside world... while the troubled youth type guy surcomes to inner turmoil trying to discern just what the hell's going in his head... Finally grl get tired trying to cracked him, so goes off to let him be alone in his our emotional wreckage type fight... then guy comes to conclusion that he "loves her" which was what he was prolly struggling to face and say in the first place.... okay that was fun... revery the dreamlost "back to reality" slim shady... the dream continues...

Two words.... "punching bag" it works... revery the dreamlost "...waste my days" weezer the dream continues...

There is music, but no musicans in the land of the doubles... There is knowledge, but no teachers in the land of the doubles... revery the dreamlost "yea haw" the dream continues...

dang... you wrote a book... go you

aw jeez... rev...

oh kewl... your right rune... how 'bout that... um when i get a bit... i'll work on it some... wasn't intentional though... like titled says... it was a 5 min improve... so didn't have time to go indept in structure... what came out just came out... thanx... rev...

good presence... pretty solid... rev...

hear's one of my discarded titles on a similar theme... *drum roll* "walking" rev...

beautiful in it's simplicity... rev...

good job signe... sounds real familar though... did you post it once long before in another... on another board... cause i'm swear i've seen it before... revery the dreamlost "go blue" the dream continues...

refreshing... pretty creative ... go yous.... rev...

hmm... 2nd stanza... 2nd line... for rythem might try: Why did I choose this path, today? or Why did I choose this path, this way? ....more hmm... well kinda hard if you wanna keep it strickly in four line format w/out totally rewriting the whole last stanza, ya know... but i try... Everyone that’s close, everyone It all ends now, I will not fail again As I silently say farewell I hope they will all forgive as silence let's slip my sail (or the sail) hope that helps... rev....

...bah... just put a disclaimer in the title... that way everyone under the approperate age or maturity lvl will immediately zero in on it like a moth to a flame... oh my, we might need fire extingishers... rev...

och... that's tough... small note on flow... a hypen prolly work well in place of the comma after the word 'see' in the third line of the 3rd stanza: You don't think about me, You don't know what I feel, And you never will see- Me get down and kneel, Surmise my agony, You're not my fifth wheel, My own personal taste would prolly have me de-captilize the 'm' in "ME" then shift the 4th line over some... but that's just my loose style... but that might conflict with the rest of your structure... nice "return" at the end... rev...

Charging... Gather it all To begin it again Time pulls me forward So follow me then... For a while, I shall stumble As new trails are blazed... Found in a flury Old path we will raise... time... revery the dreamlost "fuzzy wuzzy was a bear..."(m. goose & grim) the dream continues...