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eye perk up I like... rev...

iambic: a metrical foot consisting of one short syllable followed by one long syllable or of one unstressed syllable followed by one stressed syllable (as in above) metrical foot: pretty much a syllable. revery the dreamlost "bunnies, it must be bunnies... or maybe midgets..."(buffy musical) the dream continues...

"what do you mean, it just fell off." "So, what are you gonna do now... Shoot me?" "tell me about the rabbits, george..." (psuedo of mice and men) "have u found jesus yet..." "Sir, I assure you I do not work for Amway." "I'm in a hospital...what could go wrong?" (hot shots) from darwin awards: "Don't worry, there's no way you can stab through a flack vest..." revery the dreamlost "ayyyeeeaaaah" the dream continues...

'argh' rev...

...well said... glad to you around s'more revery the dreamlost "i'm running out of quotes" the dream continues...

yeah kewl... neato format... am flattered that i expired u... kewl... way kewl... um, but really i expired that? hmmm, was something i did in fall? did anyone get hurt? Were their witnesses ... should i be worried ...does spok know? heh, j/curious... anyway, think u out did me style wise... oui vay, I feel like the mackintosh... revery the dreamlost "doodle or else!"(elfshoes) the dream continues...

congrats to the winners um... hey wyv... think that's one of the best reviews i'm every got... thanx... rev...

Hey rune...just a note of encoragement and on poems making in general... unless your trying to emulate a specific form of poetry... say for example a sonnet or a haiku... you need not worry about structured rules and whatnot... However, I understand that like most things, creativity does not exist in a vacum, and your prolly not going to re-invent the wheel... So it's okay to study structured forms while you endeavour to make them your own... Muscian do it all the time... That said... don't feel limited by any set rules... Mix and match... Who knows, you may create a new hybrid style for others to follow... Like cyril said... keep writing... You have a lot to say. eventually you'll figure out 'how' you want to say it. Personally, I like the sing-song quality... but i'm just silly like that... A good way to feel to out what your writing is to perform it. Not just 'say it'... I mean throw yourself into your words... If your writing a love poem... Then be in love... Even if that love is long lost and buried in your mind... Put yourself so deep in the memory of that love, that it's lucid and real again...if only for that small quiet moment... Carry your words with you... Even if their only half formed. Go out into world with their beat in your head... Or meditate on them in quiet reflection while waiting stuck in traffic... revery the dreamlost "DHM?" the dream continues...

...i've seen the end result of a lifetime of recklessness... and then seen many others cut down too early by the same recklessness... shatter, broken, cerated dreams turned to walking nightmares... Tends to give ya perspective in life...if nothing else... I admire anyone able to pull themselves back from the brink... revery the dreamlost "we've all walked through fire, some of us just had our feet held to the flame..." the dream continues...

taps foot like the pulse... good topic... nice to believe in above... i'm a little too jaded of late to share in your ethuasiam... but it's still nice to hold on too... revery the dreamlost "sociopaths are bad m'kay" the dream continues...

opens vault.... rev's take on depressive mood vs creativity circa 2000... ... depresive moods are hotbeds for creative writing... but the wretching of the soul thru that addictive bittersweet feeling,is not pleasant... and is hard to fight, once its get a hold of you... you try to shake it off... but it calls back to you... cause you hate the feeling but a the same time it's a true and deep penetrating feeling... one (of) the most pure... and addictive... and dangerous.... i try to avoid it nowadays... closes vault... ...side note... good poem dark eye... I wrote my 'lighta' poem in a reply to similar reaction to someone elses depression thoughts on the pen... ain't it kewl when that happens revery the dreamlost "happy, happy, joy, joy"(ren n'stippy) the dream continues...

...ya know... i never take for granted someone acting as the collective concieous a.k.a voice of reason/peace maker... lord, knows i've played that role too many times... thanx for shouldering the load peredhill... revery the dreamlost "to explain we must refrain" the dream continues...

the person above me writes: of fire and rain of love with pain and the many hero's in his reign ...he also happen to be a 8-bit theater fanatic... revery the dreamlost "10 more minutes mom, 10 more minutes..." the dream continues...

okay blondemoon grl you got me stumped.. can't for the life of figure out what ICrC means... went through every netspeak resourse i could find and came up with nada... you can pm me... if you want... oh btw... it was a fragment of pretty long poem i wrote 6 years ago... Alas, it was lost along with about 15 others, when my highschool writing jornal came up missing... pity... rev...

i feel ya... and reply with one of my lost poems... fragment: of hazy skys and altered states we no longer can partake for the pain -pulls like a chain rev...

good point, never would have saw it on my own, but good point... i'd considered writting something myself to lighten the mood... but my hearts just not in it right now... revery the dreamlost "Darkness has hunger that's insatiable, and lightness has a call that hard to hear."(Indigo grls) the dream continues...

ya ever notice... almost every poet has a poem about mirrors... rev...

um... tassal guy... try this next time... put truck in nuetral... get friends to help push truck out of drive way and down the road some... then start car... rev...

...you forgot... 'loser, momma's boy, whimp, and sissy...' rev...

the person above has been a honored guest for quite some time now... and should cousider joining... rev...

very nice... rev...

...am waiting for kilroy to show up rev...

there are fleas, but no dogs in the land of the doubles... there is enlightenment, but no sound of one hand clapping the the land of doubles... :/ rev...

really? didn't know that... kewl... rev...

ah, read the other other thread... so this thread finally makes since to me... rev...