reverie

chew some peppermint... it's a natural stress releaver... In korea I used to carry them by the bag fulls... Yep, yep those were the days... Muti-flavored Tums(anti-acids) in one cargo pocket and peppermints in the other... revery the dreamlost "Put it in your heart Where tomorrow shines." ~REM -shiny happy people the dream continues...

hmm, well if the sex weren't off I'd say Illianna Wolfsong for the second one... but since it is... I'll go with Soarin Icarus... 1ST one's hard too... Scarlet O'Harby, I think... rev...

hmm, I would have gone with Doc Evil too... but since he's taken... i'll try Zool??? rev...

kudos I like it... I think beginning poets from who are talented in other writing fields can come up with lots of neat stuff 'cause they don't know, are not aware, or haven't formed they own structural/style rules... so they don't have to work as hard to break out habits... so every trail is a new and fresh and ya... if that make any since... revery the dreamlost "i am not an egg..." the dream continues...

was wondering a little about that...the structure of your last couple of poems caught my eye... 'guess you're trying out new things... ah... just read that 'last words or last cause' one... this explains even more... thanx rev...

gin up... nice you've grown some since last i was here... liked the true story one too revery the dreamlost "failing in your endeavour" the dream continues...

neat... will try to catch a show every now and again... rev...

though we finished ours? oh well... was fun anyways... rev...

um... take it ez X... never had any problem w/ you regarding everything your leaving about... am confused as well, but then again i'm not around much either... Well, will miss your orignal verses. Good luck with the songwriting... and take care, revery the dreamlost "all you want to do is something good, so be ready to ridiculed and misunderstood...(aimee mann, it's not safe)" the dream continues...

*tips his hat* So let the cold rain of night, freeze my heart warm. And muffle my mind, to let loose the storm And chain it to rhythm, to set ups the streams To quiet the demons, and silence the screams: Of Rage and of Worry, Of Fear and Regret The Tragic, the Bitten The Burned and the Set revery the dreamlost "Open the wounds that once you did cover Open them up, to help you recover" the dream continues...

later... have fun revery the dreamlost "time has passed a bit or so..." the dream continues...

i agree... it is very good... though I find the last line somewhat perplexing... revery the dreamlost "the answer in thee" the dream continues...

...i can relate been there... great poem though... you expressed your misery beautifully... At least you have an outlet... and look at all the lovely people that care revery the dreamlost "don't be sad, be the other way(tiny toons)" the dream continues...

Awesome! simply Awesome... nice seeing at theme carried all the way through complete... say ah, mind telling us what you were reading??? revery the dreamlost "one two three, once again go...(a. mann)" the dream continues...

great idea zariah... Suggested title: The Pen-a-gram... oh wait never oh never mind... still great idea. cheers... revery the dreamlost "i'm a superball(a. mann.)" the dream continues...

ahhh... i still remember before most ya'll even showed up on the old b1 banquet hall(pre-UBB) just after server III got reincarnated as blitz 1 or 2. I forget it's been so long... Only name that I recall from that era is gry... Of course the quality was no where near where it was 'till all you story teller's started putting down roots... (was mostly random rambles, spam, flames, pleas for help, strategem, propaganda, on-going conversations, and of course complaints about the developer of the game...) I left it to ramble lot's (lots!!!) and engage in phycological warfare witha few guildes and their offspring in the b2 ... Biggest claim to fame and bludder was inciting the formation of the Red Wizards of Thay Guild... That and being formally band from all B1 Tournies... after 'bout a year I popped my head back in... WOOOW! B1 had Story Tellers... Lot's of them... and How!!! Joat and Rydia struck me the most... revery the dreamlost "what do you see when you turn out the lights? (beatles)" the dream continues...

death is silence... a final stillness of the soul. where we rest in blessed dreamless sleep forever... or it's like regal said... it's a door... The jurys still out for me... while my protestant judea-christian(on 3rd doctrine now) mindset battles my partially buddist heritage that opened the door for toaist and gnostic perspectives; all balanced against the backdrop of our ever increasing hedonist/humanist society... so pretty much my spiritual aspects a mess... as a palm reader once told me..."you have an awesome spiritual foundation, you're just neglecting it..." revery the dreamlost "la, la...(teletubbies)" the dream continues...

the thing i admire most is how some of the ppl on the pen... are so prolific... and with quality to boot... *sighs* must be nice... revery the dreamlost "tapping the flow, only just so..." the dream continues...

...count me in vlad... great idea... I need a challenge to bring my poetry back...and tied me over 'till i find another muse... revery the dreamlost "words are flowing out like endless rain into a paper cup(Beatles)" the dream continues...

I like it... cynical, but sadly true in many cases... hmm, who was it that said somethine along the lines of: at the heart of every cynic is a disappointed idealist... revery the dreamlost "That's some funky lemonade you got going there babe(G-love and Special Sauce)" the dream continues...

*applauds...* very orginal... write more... revery the dreamlost "fire the sky, and sale the sky...(REM)" the dream continues...

very nice... good show... might consider replacing 'wither' with 'fade' in the last stanza... but then again, that phrase might be a little to cliche for your tastes... oh well just a suggestion... revery the dreamlost "build that wall(aimee mann.)" the dream continues...

...be careful not you lose your own true color to pixialated reality you've unleashed... revery the dreamlost "all things in moderation...(me, but i prolly stole it from aristotle)" the dream continues...

good going keeping that chin up guy... Life's what you make it... i've been out of highschool for 6 years now... and I've moved atleast 6 times since then due to the military... ('bout to move again...getting picked up for recruiter duty 'next APR...) Change will challenge you and make you work harder than you ever worked before...in a effort to return to that stable feeling... some times you get back there... so times you stuck in the current with no shores... keep treading water and you'll be alright... Set goals and make plans... even if you don't follow through with them... at least you looking ahead... and that puts you one better than most other's around you... Stay true and good if you can... but realize compromises may have to made along the way... life happens and no one will fault on the premise of survival... Have back up plans... Networking enables the flow of information and energy... do this in life as well as in your job... save 10% (or as close to it as you can manage) of everything you ever make... My heads not exactly it's most lucid self right now... so things are coming out vague... Stress sux... But whatever you end up doing... do it well... revery the dreamlost "the answer is c...(modern folklore)" the dream continues...

i agree w/arwen... last stanza is profound... revery the dreamlost "...nothing fuels a good flirtation, like need and anger and desperation(aimee mann/the moth)" the dream continues...