Peredhil

Too relatable. The days are like ripples in a stream of similarity, and the water isn't clear. But I've found it is worth enduring every day to get to the next. Never know when a change is coming.

I feel oddly called out.

O.o

By redub, do you mean MST3k commentary? Perhaps the use of square brackets and italics would do it? [Brilliant thinking pre-coffee. I wonder what he can think once caffeinated?]

LOL!!!

Oi, I know this goat.

How could anyone not like you. You are now my favorite uncle too.

Peredhil wanders in to listen. Removing one of the dust covers from a plushy chair, he sits to observe, unaware that his Giant Guinea Pig bodyguards, Guido & Nuncio, have taken up positions in the shadows behind him.

Beautiful descriptions. Captures modern parenting well.

I pray that your problems work out soon. I LIKE your writing.

LOL. The saddest of sad 1%.

Too true, true too.

That's rather deeply philosophical.

That got a full belly laugh!

Brilliant.

Oh my Lady Gaga! (OMLGg). I needed a chuckle!

Oh dear...

Wow. Just wow. Gut-poetry. Nicely done; good to see you post again.

Peredhil wanders in and takes a seat quietly Hello old friend, welcome back home to the Keep. Still keen of mind, they sit in comfortable silence, only the flash of their eyes revealing a deeper communication of thought.

Interesting. Paragraphing would make a smoother read, helping to break it up for the visually impaired.

Nice!

I really enjoy this. Well done.

Right forum, and we'll done. Welcome back.

This type of crazy belongs here at the Pen!

Good use of line breaks to imply punctuation. Nicely crafted free-form