Peredhil

Attack from behind as he leaves.

Too relatable. The days are like ripples in a stream of similarity, and the water isn't clear. But I've found it is worth enduring every day to get to the next. Never know when a change is coming.

I feel oddly called out.

O.o

By redub, do you mean MST3k commentary? Perhaps the use of square brackets and italics would do it? [Brilliant thinking pre-coffee. I wonder what he can think once caffeinated?]

LOL!!!

Oi, I know this goat.

How could anyone not like you. You are now my favorite uncle too.

Peredhil wanders in to listen. Removing one of the dust covers from a plushy chair, he sits to observe, unaware that his Giant Guinea Pig bodyguards, Guido & Nuncio, have taken up positions in the shadows behind him.

Beautiful descriptions. Captures modern parenting well.

I pray that your problems work out soon. I LIKE your writing.

LOL. The saddest of sad 1%.

Too true, true too.

That's rather deeply philosophical.

That got a full belly laugh!

Brilliant.

Oh my Lady Gaga! (OMLGg). I needed a chuckle!

Oh dear...

Wow. Just wow. Gut-poetry. Nicely done; good to see you post again.

Peredhil wanders in and takes a seat quietly Hello old friend, welcome back home to the Keep. Still keen of mind, they sit in comfortable silence, only the flash of their eyes revealing a deeper communication of thought.

Interesting. Paragraphing would make a smoother read, helping to break it up for the visually impaired.

Nice!

I really enjoy this. Well done.

Right forum, and we'll done. Welcome back.

This type of crazy belongs here at the Pen!